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Official Campaign: http://youtube.com/watch?v=q6A672cRCN8

Story:
When Magnus Grey, a murderer and untrust worthy solider and Portal traveller travels to out world he realises that the other two Portal keys to his one was on this world he had to get them so he can rule the world...but Jen Qui another Portal traveller won't let him. But he can't do it alone so he transports Alex from his school to the Forbidden Zone. When Alex returns he finds out about Magnus and how important it was to make sure Magnus doesn't manage to follow his plans out...

Cast:
Jen Qui - Stephen Smith
Alex - Sam Mills
Magnus Grey - Joe Akroyd
Mal Torchus - Phil Lunt
Lea Milligan - Tara Staunton
Jack Morgan - Sam Jenkins

Crew:
Written - William Phelps & Stephen Smith
Cinematographer - Sam Jenkins
Camera Opperators - Sam Jenkins, Stephen Smith, & Sam Mills
Edited - Stephen Smith
VFX - The VFX Group
Story - Stephen Smith & Sam Mills

Teaser/ Promos:
Promo #1: http://youtube.com/watch?v=ArIccXSbqaM
Promo #2: http://youtube.com/watch?v=1uENs0Lf8FQ
Promo #3: http://youtube.com/watch?v=M5keirZm5HU
Promo #4: http://youtube.com/watch?v=Ogv8vEbdatQ
Promo #5: http://youtube.com/watch?v=wjT-8fj3k_E
Promo #6: http://youtube.com/watch?v=lKGtsAJntrQ
Promo #7: http://youtube.com/watch?v=zos6DpnYiq4
Promo #8: http://youtube.com/watch?v=lpENr4GZ1Rc

Exclusive Scene:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=KMVRVEfOkYA

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www.rivingtonfilm.co.nr
www.philmz.ws
 
the sound is atrocious.

that is all I could think about watching the trailer.. that and the stolen music from Requiem for a Dream. Better sound trumps even the best looking films and can make the worst looking something easier to swallow.
 
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Yea, the sound is pretty bad dude and the trailer isn't paced well, even though there's some decent shot. Too much Magic Bullet. Plus using Requiem for a Dream as a background song simply screams "student filmmakers!!" You didn't even edit to the song, it was just droning on in the background. Too bad, from the poster and the stills I was expecting something more polished.
 
As true as the others' comments are, you're doing much better than I did at your age. Keep going.
 
When people notice a song that's clearly ripped from the original soundtrack of a previous movie, it really harms its integrity.

Your animated titles look pretty good, but I think that's working against you a bit by making the rest of the movie look worse by comparison. An attractive 3D production logo is followed by poorly lit footage with bad audio? You're going to confuse the audience.

Really though, don't let any of this discourage you. You'll need to accept that a lot of people aren't going to like anything you do until you get better at it, I've dealt with quite a bit of that.
 
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