"pop yo collah" music video...

I think this is really good. The best part is how its quiet in the beginning, then you break into the song. I think you did a great job! I subscribed to you on youtube.
 
@deltoidjohn thanks bro! yeah, i didnt have the text in the final video when i premiered it... it was the request of the performers that they wanted the text to be in there...
 
@Paunch thanks for watching... we shot it with the Panasonic DVX100B camera, i had a dolly on set and 5 work lights... it was just me and two of my buddies and my girlfriend who help out on grip work...
 
yeah looks very good...not a big fan of the song, but you did your thing and made these guys look a lot more pro than they sound :)
 
krumprak said:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pzYGtU-lIOM
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First of all the video takes way to long to start, 1:14 is Overkill. I would say the longest an intro for any video should be is no more than 30-40 seconds and that is with something interesting.

Second you see the widescreen matte on the bottom of the screen but not the top, what's up with that? At 2:07 when the dancers comes in you see the Matte Get shrink the screen even more, it looks pretty nasty how that jumped out at me.


2:11 Bottom left corner you see the Blanket/Sheet you used ruffle up and what seems like lift up from the wall, you need to fix that.

You see the same problem again at 2:19. It looks like your framing was off and you went to low, looks bad honestly. Also as stated the font you used for the "Pop Yo Colla" almost looks comical ( cartoon like ) another poor choice in my opinion.

4:38 when the second song drops I think the light blue bars works a lot better and actually looks pretty cool. Now back to the first main song you had some good performances, great energy, and a lot of people so that's a plus. IMO what would have made your video better is this


*Shorten/Speed up the intro
*Choose some different color bars for your video, white background + white bars did not look right for this video
* Next time use a better font ( if any at all )
* Be careful on your framing, the bottom of the screen looks nasty

Overall though pretty good video, minus the mistakes on your part.
 
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