DOC: Pilot Electric Theater Arcade

[DCTBradJohnson]

Hey guys, I'm pitching my first big budget production right now and its come down to me and one other guy. We were both invited to come have a short test shoot for about two hours, and from that footage we both have to make a short pilot to present to the investor, and from this he will choose who gets the project. So I need your help guys, let me know what you think of this rough cut and where I can make it better, you won't hurt my feelings. I only had two hours with these guys and only a flashlight to light with, so keep that in mind. It goes to my sound mixer and special effects guys on Monday. All your comments are appreciated.

http://vimeo.com/18795848

Thanks again,
Brad

 

[Maxim]

Genuinely I think that was great. The titles could use some work as they look a bit "amterish" and some of the camera movements should of had a bit more planning to them but apart from that it was good! The man is very charismatic and you can feel his passion. I would defiantly watch this show and I am not even that interested in video games nor was alive during that era (Im 18). The raw feeling of how its shot combined with the the main guy creates a good story I would defiantly follow.

Good luck with it