SHORT: Photographer profile doc shot at sunrise on Bondi Beach, Sydney

I enjoyed it. I'd list as strengths: variety of shots, sound mix (even though I didn't love the music), and pacing. Favorite shot was the steadicam with the low sun and the circular sculpture (2:08). Color was great, titles minimal and tasteful.

As far as content, this is a personal qualm but...I'm wary of writing about writing, photography about photography, etc. It strikes me as self-indulgent and insular. And given that you do choose such a subject, what is new or different enough about this guy or this place? The photographer seems like a perfectly nice guy, but the quotes are all sort of pleasant and bland. I would love some conflict, some insight, some surprise.

All together, really nice work. Keep at it.
 
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