Lrdmora
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First of all, thanks for looking at the post. I'm looking for some feedback on my framing and composition and have included a link to a rough edit sequence from the film I am working on. The lighting is off because I lost half my lights 15 minutes into shooting and I had a little trouble with the sound there is no color correction to speak of at this point its still a rough edit. I will be re-shooting this part and wanted to get a little feedback on the framing, composition, and editing.
There is a link to a .mov file (1.37mb) and some screengrabs. Feedback good and bad is appreciated! Especially if you see something that really needs work! Thanks a ton!
One to Six - gun sequence:
http://files.filefront.com/Gun+Sequencemov/;6250042;;/fileinfo.html
Oh just so you know the focus in the third grab is supposed to be the pillow, he's going to be reaching under and grabbing the gun. . .
There is a link to a .mov file (1.37mb) and some screengrabs. Feedback good and bad is appreciated! Especially if you see something that really needs work! Thanks a ton!
One to Six - gun sequence:
http://files.filefront.com/Gun+Sequencemov/;6250042;;/fileinfo.html
Oh just so you know the focus in the third grab is supposed to be the pillow, he's going to be reaching under and grabbing the gun. . .
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