Office Haiku..
- Thread starter Anhar_Miah
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Beat Takeshi
Two-Hip Shakur
how many syllables must hit your brain minerals
before its considered to be a Haiku material
would it be 5 to 7 and a 7 to a 5
to strive to survive the rules that apply
shackled to the pattern but does it really matter
when the lyrics hit so hard your teeth start to chatter
from trying to recite them when then I just rewrite them
then reverse the burst of thirst to try to fight them
to deny my draw is a flaw in your awe
you claw at your jaw as it gets raw from the law
laid by my cool as you fools try to tool
together small pool of stool known as the Haiku...
before its considered to be a Haiku material
would it be 5 to 7 and a 7 to a 5
to strive to survive the rules that apply
shackled to the pattern but does it really matter
when the lyrics hit so hard your teeth start to chatter
from trying to recite them when then I just rewrite them
then reverse the burst of thirst to try to fight them
to deny my draw is a flaw in your awe
you claw at your jaw as it gets raw from the law
laid by my cool as you fools try to tool
together small pool of stool known as the Haiku...
Larry Rutledge
Fest Master
Mouse is in da house
Spittin' his rhymes with much ease
Beat box is next door
Oh that I could see
Each person here count fingers
I feel so silly
I can't make a rap
And my haiku ain't that great
Now scripts don't seem hard
Spittin' his rhymes with much ease
Beat box is next door
Oh that I could see
Each person here count fingers
I feel so silly
I can't make a rap
And my haiku ain't that great
Now scripts don't seem hard
Anhar_Miah
Veteran
To think outside box,
One needs to have a box first,
This the real twist.
One needs to have a box first,
This the real twist.
Jason Adams
Section Moderator
This thread still rages
many minds fill these pages
Is the end not nigh
just five and sevens
I now need a distraction
from this distraction
The Avid not touched
Since Haiku taketh time much
What have I become
many minds fill these pages
Is the end not nigh
just five and sevens
I now need a distraction
from this distraction
The Avid not touched
Since Haiku taketh time much
What have I become
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Rick Meyer
Veteran
Careful when hearing,
advice very much needed.
dilettantes abound.
advice very much needed.
dilettantes abound.
Jason Adams
Section Moderator
I have the Letus
It flips unlike the brevis
does brevis flip now?
It flips unlike the brevis
does brevis flip now?
JasonFox
Internet Sensation
cinealma
Veteran
Wow is this for real?
shouldn't you guys be filming?!
Haiku for a year?
This must be a drug,
Anhar laced this thread I say,
he went way too far.
He wanted to help,
but instead everyone writes,
now there's no Love Fest.
Rhyming is "hard",
I try but it won't come out,
all I have is Lard!
shouldn't you guys be filming?!
Haiku for a year?
This must be a drug,
Anhar laced this thread I say,
he went way too far.
He wanted to help,
but instead everyone writes,
now there's no Love Fest.
Rhyming is "hard",
I try but it won't come out,
all I have is Lard!
Started script today,
friends that will work for pizza,
can't wait for feature.
Short is nothing big,
just proving myself for now,
feature will be great!
We start next winter,
have a ghost killing people,
but original.
How can you do that,
have a ghost killing people,
and original?
Just wait and see then,
cool characters in a white,
winter wonderland.
friends that will work for pizza,
can't wait for feature.
Short is nothing big,
just proving myself for now,
feature will be great!
We start next winter,
have a ghost killing people,
but original.
How can you do that,
have a ghost killing people,
and original?
Just wait and see then,
cool characters in a white,
winter wonderland.