"Oatmeal" Final

Re: "Oatmeal" Final

much tighter. much better. but you're still a freak! ;D

i want to barf everytime i hear that smacking sound with the mouth full of oatmeal.

NA-STEEE!!!!

there are a few too many cuts in the kitchen. a little disorienting. in fact, they're so quick, you can probably omit them altogether. but the whole beginning is way tighter and more enjoyable. good work. nasty freak. ;D
 
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word.

looking forward to your contest entry. you got some good stuffs goins on...
 
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freak indeed! greeches, I like your opening with the pill decintergrating. I agree with antomic with too many cuts. I don't think its nessary to have all those cuts not enless you intentionally did it. That was, um, sick man. ;)
 
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Remember kids if your gonna eat oatmeal dont drink red beer, it dont look pretty in the toilet..arrrggghhhhhh.....


** I should go to work now **
 
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