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Okay I checked it out. Not bad over all. I think you could have cut out some of the not so funny parts and trimmed it down some to just the good stuff. I think at 4 minutes long it would have been a better piece. So great storytelling. I am sure you are aware that the lighting could have been way better, but I am sure you didn't use any lights. Keep at it.
 
I didn't watch the whole thing.. but what I did watch was eh...

The comedy seemed kind of cheesy and nerdy to be honest. The jokes were kind of over the top but not in a funny way.. if that makes sense.
 
great work really liked it
could have been shorter and outside you should have reflected some light onto the face of the guy on the left.
could have used a few reaction close ups outside
other than that real nice work
 
dangal said:
outside you should have reflected some light onto the face of the guy on the left.
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Yeah, althoug I color corrected it to look darker, it was actually extremely bright outside and I could barely tell what anything looked like. Then I watched the footage later thought "Damn..." but we all decided that it was too hot outside to re-shoot. It kind of bugs me to look at, but oh well. The lines are there, so we decided to let it go.
 
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