NOVEMBER Fan-Film shot with 100A

Well, I'll start with the good stuff, for the most part it looked pretty good. There were a few framing issues in a few scenes, but it looked like you picked your shots pretty well. Like the colors, very remenicent of November and I guess that is what you were going for.

Now for the constructive criticism. Like ggoerl said, the acting really brought down the film, in the first scene in the laudrymat the actor that dies not only flubs his line, but then looks directly into the camera after doing it. bad bad bad :(.
Another thing that bugged me was the gun you used, why didn't you at least spray paint the orange barrel?
The last thing would be the plot of the film, the name of the film is "frame" and the actor keeps getting a message to look "outside the frame" but this really has nothing to do with the film. In november it went into more detail about the whole photography aspect, but in this film there is no mention.

It looks like you did put alot of time into this, and I congratulate you for completing a project like this on your own. For your next one, definetly look into getting real actors, friends just don't cut it, and in the end that was the thing that brought this down for me.
 
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