No KY BIO Lab

I thought some of your shots looked really good, especially the stream at the beginning. My advice is to tighten it up, maybe cutting it down to about 2/3 that length, maybe more. The shots towards the end seem to go on a little long without conveying the urgency of keeping the lab away. I didn't like the music that much for this spot and kind of wanted to hear a voiceover with it. Finally, because of the stretch at the end I didn't think the shots of the gas mask and biohazard symbol were that effective. But, I'm thinking a voiceover could really set up that shot at the end to give the jolting effect you're looking for. Again, I like your outdoorsy shots though.
 
I thought it was shot very well, and loved the field and tractor shots!! The only thing is the compression was a little jittery, and I couldn't make out most of the wording due to the size and compression.


Nice job!
 
Thanks! I thought the field and tractor shot turned out pretty well. This was all shot in a day. The song is an old song that my brother in law recorded in the 80's. His land that has been in his family for generations would be taken by the lab.
 
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