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It's pretty much your usual sick and twisted fodder. I.e; films about farting. I did find the execution pretty good. The animation is pro. The main flaw in your production would be the sound. It sounds like the character is in a room, when actually he is outside, next to a cliff or something, and I can see plants moving in the wind. So you need to add atmospheric sounds to that to make the image sit well with the sound. Like wind, and rustling branches, and what ever to make it work. Look at other films with similar locations and think about the sound. Also the lighting is off. It should feel hotter and there should be more cast shadows
 
dogcat, I take it you hate fart jokes/films/posters/ etc?

thanks for the feeds peeps, anyone find it funny?
 
I've never seen any fart posters (will keep an eye out!). I don't hate fart jokes, I studied animation production years ago, so I've seen the whole farting thing come and go. It's an easy way to be instantly rude. I suggest you exagerate the gonads more , to make the character even more obscene
 
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cool.

One thing is if you turn arund and look at the sun in this shot, you will notice a large cloud covering the sun, creating a soft light.....um, that is if you can turn around in this CGI scene ....;)
 
I should have said so, the animation rocks. Very good skills there, and the backround too. And Sproketz, it's good to be a critic. If you only want to hear the good stuff then you are probably not an artist. When you are serious about your' work, you generally want to hear what's bad about it, cause you allready know what's good about it. Obin, what software are you working with, and what renderer, if you please?
 
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Ok, so that was my brothers work FTR, and he uses LightWave 8.5 and beta 9 we have a render farm, and rendered in 1280x720p HD we have about 30Ghz of render power, just enough to make jobs not so painfull!
 
I also don't like fart and similar jokes, but the animation impressed me. And the guy looks like the "Crazy Frog", if you know him.
 
Nice job. I have no idea the work required to put something like that together, but it loks daunting. I think that dogcat's advice was spot on. I would love to see this if and when those suggestions were apllied.
 
As much as I hate toilet humor cause it turns my stomach, I do recognize some first rate work. That was a great character, minus the penis. The eye movements were superb. I do agree with the sound comments. A lot of people like fart humor but they're probably a bit younger than the average age in this forum. (just a guess) Nice going
 
They looked like balls to me, that's what I liked about him. There's something vulnerable about a loose pair. I would ad a crooked member, and seal the deal.
 
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They looked like balls to me, that's what I liked about him. There's something vulnerable about a loose pair. I would ad a crooked member, and seal the deal.
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Now that's funny.... And the annimation was funny. Really looked so clean.. and swinging balls is always a crowd pleaser...

The only thing I would add and thought it would end on.. was the thing squishing his puny balls against the ground and a couple of painful sighs..


I do thing a bit of sound design would be nice too..

want to see more!
 
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