NEW Vitamin Water Commercial " Formula 50" featuring J. Staffz (music producer)

that was pretty bad. wasnt nice or funny - unless you're very young and just starting out.

there wasnt any establishing shots to visually explain who the guy is or why we care about him (maybe it should have started with him in a studio...)

the cut to the blackberry with the record art seemed gratuitous until i watched it for the 4th time. shot should have been longer and contrast added so you can see the screen better

it was shot hand-held. but here wasnt anything in the composition to justify that. you should have either gone tight and loose or just locked it down.

composition was boring. just a guy in the center-ish of the screen with apparently meaningless and distracting background

and just to be nit-picky. it wasnt a 30, 45 or 60. if youre going to make a mock spot, it should at least fit to usable standards...

global fail in my opinion.
 
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To add to wgzn's criticism's, even your glory shot of the label was out of focus. That's a big no-no. And the storyline makes no sense. Drink the water and you'll cough up quarters? WTF?
 
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