New Teaser Trailer Check it out...
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very nice.. ill play a critic though anyway.. i liked this. it seemed like the acting was up to par, and i liked the camera movement. the music and sound was good as well. ..one thing that did bother me just a little was the lighting.. there was just too much of it. . for such a seemingly mysteriously dark and dramatic peice, i just wanted to see a bit less light.. a bit more black and shadow, to add to that suspense and dramatic element. but other than that(which is just a technical plea) i thought it looked very well done . reminded me of a spot for an evening tv cop drama like nypd blue or somthing. very well done. for me it was just missing that thing that just reaches out and grabs your attention, and gets you think that you HAve to see this. ..i know it was just a teaser, but a long one..probably almost long enough to be a reg tv spot trailer. in a longer full trailer i would liked to have some sort of background on the protagonist...but ill just stop the critic now.. it was great!
very nice.. ill play a critic though anyway.. i liked this. it seemed like the acting was up to par, and i liked the camera movement. the music and sound was good as well. ..one thing that did bother me just a little was the lighting.. there was just too much of it. . for such a seemingly mysteriously dark and dramatic peice, i just wanted to see a bit less light.. a bit more black and shadow, to add to that suspense and dramatic element. but other than that(which is just a technical plea) i thought it looked very well done . reminded me of a spot for an evening tv cop drama like nypd blue or somthing. very well done. for me it was just missing that thing that just reaches out and grabs your attention, and gets you think that you HAve to see this. ..i know it was just a teaser, but a long one..probably almost long enough to be a reg tv spot trailer. in a longer full trailer i would liked to have some sort of background on the protagonist...but ill just stop the critic now.. it was great!
J.R. Hudson
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I thought it was very well done. I agree with IAL on the lighting (but only in a few scenes that I saw) would have loved to have seen a darker (se7enish) lighting style for some of those clips.
But that was only a few of them. The rest looked great and it looks (for a teaser) damn good! Cant wait to see it!
I thought it was very well done. I agree with IAL on the lighting (but only in a few scenes that I saw) would have loved to have seen a darker (se7enish) lighting style for some of those clips.
But that was only a few of them. The rest looked great and it looks (for a teaser) damn good! Cant wait to see it!
mkhsfz
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Thanks for the reply... actually the next trailer will show more of what the movie is about. The movie is a Action/mystery/comedy. It's like the movie "Scream" not to be taken as a serious drama like the movie "Seven". But just kind of a fun movie, something for everyone (Pg-13). I know that the Tralier dosen't show this but I just wanted to have fun with it. Plus the actors like to see some progress. Also it is something that the cast and crew can show to family and friends and (hopefully) be proud of.
Thanks for the reply... actually the next trailer will show more of what the movie is about. The movie is a Action/mystery/comedy. It's like the movie "Scream" not to be taken as a serious drama like the movie "Seven". But just kind of a fun movie, something for everyone (Pg-13). I know that the Tralier dosen't show this but I just wanted to have fun with it. Plus the actors like to see some progress. Also it is something that the cast and crew can show to family and friends and (hopefully) be proud of.
John C Lyons
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theres really no need for me to add any more comments here because i agree totally with both of the other reviewers. just wanted to let you know i checked it out as well and let us know when the really real trailer is online. is this a short or feature length?
theres really no need for me to add any more comments here because i agree totally with both of the other reviewers. just wanted to let you know i checked it out as well and let us know when the really real trailer is online. is this a short or feature length?
G
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I think it looks quite good.
I really like the quick flash to white on the initial transitions.
I'm wondering about the part where it says "A Woman Murdered" "A Man With No Memory". I'm wondering if there might be a different way to bring that text in. This is just a minor point, though.
I really like the look of it overall.
I think it looks quite good.
I really like the quick flash to white on the initial transitions.
I'm wondering about the part where it says "A Woman Murdered" "A Man With No Memory". I'm wondering if there might be a different way to bring that text in. This is just a minor point, though.
I really like the look of it overall.
STORYTELLER32
Well-known member
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I agree with the comments made above and I did like it as well. I guess the thing is if it's not a serious drama, your trailer doesn't reflect that. Right now it reads like a serious film which is why you got those comments.
Question: how did you create your soundtrack for your trailer? Was it using "soundtrack" the program?
I agree with the comments made above and I did like it as well. I guess the thing is if it's not a serious drama, your trailer doesn't reflect that. Right now it reads like a serious film which is why you got those comments.
Question: how did you create your soundtrack for your trailer? Was it using "soundtrack" the program?