i like the lighting, especially in the first frame with what looks to be a backlit wall?
I also like the last closeup shot, dark but still contains details. Gonna upload any video? I'm sure it'll loose something in the compression (especially in those blacks) but it'd be cool to see.
I'll upload the vid once i find a place to host it, although i'm not very proud of it - the storyline and editing are a bit incoherent - i didn't write it and was just the dp, but i did do the editing as well.