New Short film!!!!

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lirany

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I know that this have nothing to do with the HMC, but I am an HMC151 / Letus Extreme proud owner and I figured some of you feel connected to me in some sort of way.... :)

This was shot before I got the HMC with a Canon GL2...
For the record the transition between the cameras was like moving from a bicycle to an airplane... I LOVE THE HMC!!!!!!!!

Youtube link (2 parts):
Part 1: youtube.com/watch?v=7CdrFpUv-Ho
Part 2: youtube.com/watch?v=EFVgQQMp0jA

Direct Download :
http://rapidshare.com/files/249804462/The_consequences_of_Timeout_-_For_Rapidshare.avi
English subtitles:
http://rapidshare.com/files/250327354/The_consequences_of_Timeout.ENG.srt
 
Nice work, man.

Really looks nice (and the acting was good too!) I love your edit style!

I would suggest cutting the opening credits, because it's just 30 seconds of sort of dead space before the film actually starts.

Thanks for sharing.
 
Looks good. It kept my attention and I followed it all the way to the end.

One complaint though, and it's not anything to with the cinematography. I felt a little uneasy with your choice of the score in the final sequence. Using the john Murphy song that already has a connection with something else quickly takes me out your story and makes me think about the choices you are making as a storyteller. It's a good song and it fits but all I am left thinking about 28 days later and not your short.
 
I would suggest cutting the opening credits, because it's just 30 seconds of sort of dead space before the film actually starts.
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Thanks, but I really liked the opening, and most films have opening credits, but maybe I'll try to integrate credits with the actual film opening.

What program did you use to make the really kewl credits with. That was really neat.
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After effects, Trapcode lux, Tracpcode particular.

One complaint though, and it's not anything to with the cinematography. I felt a little uneasy with your choice of the score in the final sequence. Using the john Murphy song that already has a connection with something else quickly takes me out your story and makes me think about the choices you are making as a storyteller. It's a good song and it fits but all I am left thinking about 28 days later and not your short.
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You're completly right, but that was a tribute to my earlier film "Tom":
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1U_cuJ58G4A

For my small audience that song actually relates more to "Tom" than to "28 days/weeks...", it's a shame that it's like that but that's just the way it is...

Thanks Everyone for watching!
 
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