New short film online: The Night Shift

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Gukbe2000

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Our new short film The Night Shift is finished and finally online. It's a horror/adventure/comedy/romance and sort of a cross between Army of Darkness, Cemetery Man and The Mummy.

Plot:

What if you could live forever? What if you had to spend that eternity stuck in a cemetery with only a limbless corpse for a friend, and inmates that were anything but resting in peace? That's the situation for Rue Morgan, night watchman extraordinare. Rue, along with his buddy Herb, spends his nights watching out for zombies, and his days dreaming of a date with hard-nosed day-shifter, Claire. It's an okay eternity, but Rue's never had to deal with the demonic "resident" of mysterious Section 13.

The film can be viewed via the Fighting Owl Films website here: http://www.fightingowlfilms.com/films.html

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
 
Gukbe2000 said:
Our new short film The Night Shift is finished and finally online. It's a horror/adventure/comedy/romance and sort of a cross between Army of Darkness, Cemetery Man and The Mummy.

Plot:

What if you could live forever? What if you had to spend that eternity stuck in a cemetery with only a limbless corpse for a friend, and inmates that were anything but resting in peace? That's the situation for Rue Morgan, night watchman extraordinare. Rue, along with his buddy Herb, spends his nights watching out for zombies, and his days dreaming of a date with hard-nosed day-shifter, Claire. It's an okay eternity, but Rue's never had to deal with the demonic "resident" of mysterious Section 13.

The film can be viewed via the Fighting Owl Films website here: http://www.fightingowlfilms.com/films.html

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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A couple of comments.

On the initial encounter between the young woman and young man, during the exchange, the camera 'crosses' the line, and the woman varyingly appers on the left and right side of the screen. It sort of looks like you didn't have the 'room' as the fellow is hiding behind the tree, pops out, but did move to a position that would allow you to shoot over his left shoulder towards the woman, but there was enough room for a shot over her right.

In another sequence, again woman and man, looks like it was in the shade of trees, but the exposure was for the background, resulting in the actors being 'dark'.

Need some reflectors that move along with the camera to bounce light back into their faces...
 
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