New Short Comedy Sketch - "Snitch"

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dwnsthballer

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Hey everyone,

I was doing some cleaning the other day and came across some old props I had, so me and my friends put together short skit in about two hours. It came out pretty good. It’s called “Snitch”, and it’s a short film (about 3 minutes) about a little boy with a tattle problem, with an unexpected twist.

www.greenbench.tv/videos/Snitch.wmv

Enjoy, feedback is appreciated, although I’m more interested in the content than the quality.

Equipment Used:
DVX100B
Oktava
Lowel Light Kit

Sincerely,
John Holland
www.greenbench.tv
 
liked it
but I think you could have given worked a little more on the reactions of the father to the monster. He looked like he was about to laugh which ruined it for me
 
Thanks guys,

Yeah, I should have spent more time on the reactions. I had almost forgot them at first, so I had to call everyone back to do them, but then we got off track and lazy. *smacks hand* Bad dwnsthballer. ;)

It was a lot of fun though, and very hard to keep our composure. We did like 30 different takes of him busting out the closet and I just took snipets from each one.
 
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