NEW Production Intro/Logo

[Mino]

I like it, but I'd lose the silver surrounding the wash door. That's completely my problem, I don't like silver anything....On another note, you got your damn name back PK....Congrats!

 

[Kirk Gillock]

Thanks John and Safarijoe.

Jarred - That's a good idea. I'm going to try and do some compositing. I'll shoot some soap on glass and a Laundry Day shirt tossing and turning. Then try and get the shirt's logo to press against the glass. That would be COOL!! Thanks for the idea. You can have my Arni's Army idea now.

Mino - That might be really cool looking, just having the center part. I'll try it. Thanks!

 

[Kirk Gillock]

Ok, I took everyone's suggestions and made a newer version.

REVISED LOGO:
Windows Media - 800k
Quicktime - 1.1mb

The shot involves 4 elements/layers; the machine, the bubbles, the shirt/logo, and the tumbling clothes.

 

[Sirius_Doggy]

Now that is SWEET! I like it ten-fold over the original.

 

[Kirk Gillock]

Thanks Sirius. Anyone else had a look?

 

[disjecta]

PK, I personally think it's a little busy...it's just not "clean" enough (forgive the pun). To my eye, there is a lot to focus on....

I like the general idea but I think it could somehow be simpler....

 

[Sumfun]

The shirt with the logo is a good idea, but as it moves into the shot, it didn't have the same motion as the rest of the laundry did. It looked to me like a shot of someone holding the shirt and moving it into the field of view. It would be better if you can somehow give it more of the the back and forth motion of the rest of the laundry. Maybe you can lay a shirt on a piece of glass and move it back and forth and shoot it from below. Another suggestion would be to bring a wrinkled shirt to the front, then spread it out to reveal the logo.

Blue - Actually, that would be really beautiful. Have some sheets blowing in the wind. Maybe that could be the version for dramatic pieces. Thanks!

If you decide to do an R-rated piece you can have bras and panties blowing in the wind.

 

[Mino]

I still think you need to lose the silver or whatever color is around the door, just have it black. Other than that I think it's pretty cool!

 

[Kirk Gillock]

disjecta - Hmmmm What if I removed the zoom and had just a static shot?

Sumfun - It was REAL tough to get the motion just right. I tried many different techniques and motions. This was the best take. I'm sure it could be done better, but (for now) this will have to do.

Mino - I actually tried that and, even though it looked pretty good, I didn't like all the empty space. It was depressing and dark. I might go back to it. Not sure yet.