New Music Video Mike Pain Snail walk

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sebassttiann

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i shot this about a month ago on dvx 100b. it was my last video on the dvx cause i sold it to buy a HVX. this is my third video and feel i have grown alot since the previous two. rented out a local boxing rink and called up some lady friends. let me know what you think. i love criticism as i am trying to look more professional and industry. shot it dvx100b 24pa edited in final cut pro and aftereffects.

kory

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BrvnhhhHaN4
 
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there arent any street shots?? do you mean dark club scenes??? and why more?? if you dont mind me asking??? too much boxing???
 
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It’s OK. Shot well, edited well. Not great, but well. I’d ease up on the cheesy video effects and post filters. It seems like it was an exercise to see what every plugin filter could do. I’d choose one or two aesthetic styles and stick with it. I’d like something more cohesive, that was a bit like a Whitman sampler. I got bored ½ way thru and stopped watching. It’s not something that will air, but I’m sure the group got their money’s worth.

-J
 
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