New horror short "Facemen" filmed with HMC150

needs more match cuts/crosscutting/cuts in general to animate/dramatize/enliven the material

you couldve PUNCHED IN to a closeup when they bump into each other. wouldve taken nothing (no relighting or anything) all you had to do was move closer, have the actors repeat the action and pow- you couldve cut to a closer shot when they bump.

you couldve added a shaky POV shot of the guy s pov stumbling through the woods to INSERT as hes running

you could ve cut back and forth between pursuer and pursued more often for more tension

you couldve PUNCHED IN to the Knife or his evil face when the killer walk

you got some dry, awkward, stiff filmaking going on

still you made a feature, your kicking my ass in alot of ways...

ill post a short here soon, theyll be tons of amateur mistakes, stiff-awkwrad-not-cutting-enough filmaking will not be one of them.

good luck sir

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