fullcircle
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I'd just like some constructive criticism.
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need some help
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Re: need some help
Hey fullcircle, I think my first impression was the camera has no movement for the first half and I would probably work on the opening alittle with the boxes just didnt hit me hard visually. The colors looked really good and the artist seems like you can get them to play up to the camera.
I actually enjoyed the second half more, the train shot than the music fades the imagery and energy was better for me.
Overall i think you need to grab the audience with the opening more on a visual sense. The club scenes are very cool.
Hey fullcircle, I think my first impression was the camera has no movement for the first half and I would probably work on the opening alittle with the boxes just didnt hit me hard visually. The colors looked really good and the artist seems like you can get them to play up to the camera.
I actually enjoyed the second half more, the train shot than the music fades the imagery and energy was better for me.
Overall i think you need to grab the audience with the opening more on a visual sense. The club scenes are very cool.
fullcircle
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Re: need some help
thanks, i actually wanted to re shoot the opening but it's getting cold here now so i have to hurry, as far as the club goes, i had full run of the place but we kept running into the real world crew (big brite white lights, they looked like som sort of portable KINO) so alot of the footage was unusable, but i have some really great stills i'll post up later.
thanks, i actually wanted to re shoot the opening but it's getting cold here now so i have to hurry, as far as the club goes, i had full run of the place but we kept running into the real world crew (big brite white lights, they looked like som sort of portable KINO) so alot of the footage was unusable, but i have some really great stills i'll post up later.