Need some feedback on that short

Peterpan

Peterpan

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This is a Short I shot with my dvx100b, edited with premiere pro and color corected with magic bullet. It's in french (sorry about that) but I'm looking for some feedback about the shots, the editing and the photography.
This is the first time I post so any comments would be very apreciated !!!

Here is the youtube link :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3kfaOk6s9w
 
I liked the opening imagery a lot, but the it just became a telephone conversation, and bored me to tears. need to interspers it with more interesting action ... like with the two feet at the beginning.

Need a writer?

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Bravo PeterPan very good and the story is amusing (Alex is right, if you don't know what they are talking about it could be boring). The look is great and your actors did a good job. Also enjoyed the music. Du bon travail !!
 
Nice look and cinematography Peterpan but dude... watching people play with their feet (especially other dudes) is just plain nasty. Sorry, it's just plain tough to stomach unless you've got a fetish for that sort of thing.

Maybe if I understood French, I might have enjoyed the story more.

However, great look. How did you light it?
 
Didn't understand French, but the art in which you caught the emotions of the actors was great! good job!
 
Didn't understand french, so I really can't comment on the story line, but your photography, editing and colour correcting was very well done. From your post you english seems to be very good, why not put up some subtitles in English.

Best of luck and keep up the good work.
 
Thank you all

Thank you all

Thanks a lot for all your comments, I guess you are probably all right about the subject being a little boring (especially when you don't speak a word of french !)
Manymoosh you might be right, I think I'm gonna subtitle a version for dvxuser because it can probably get damn boring for you guys!

Red Malone you are right as well, it might look plain nasty, but I still love those feet images ! The story is basically this dude and this girl telling themselves about about a dream they each made, without really listening to eachother, and the close-ups of their feet are illustrating that they might as well speak to each other's feet as they are not listening one another whatsoever. I used a 750w tristar quartz halogen with softbox for key and a 250W bounced in an umbrella as fill. Thats it.

Thanks Sirocco and Bashnaran for your comments, it's very encouraging !

Please keep up posting comments !! I'll be hanging around !
 
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