My Would-Be ZombieFest Entry...

Gills

Gills

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http://s41.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1GCHPBO8KB3SM0QTJ2TWJDEEDS


There's the link for the film I got done a little too late for the contest. I was facing some computer issues and had to sort of phuck up the end a little, and I know the lady doing the broadcasts wasn't great, but she was all I had on short notice. Hopefully you'll get some kind of enjoyment out of it, so here it is. Thanks in advance for any critiques.
 
Really? The link's working fine for me...

YouSendIt is a tricky *****, but I figured you guys wouldn't want it as a torrent and I didn't want to use FileFront or something, but maybe I will.
 
Gills, just watched it.

I think the potential for some really great shots were there based on the location, and there did appear to be some good shots, though it was tough to tell with the super low compression quality ... I think I remember in the zombie threads hearing about the problem you had, and only have a low quality file left.

My critiques:
  1. Sound seemd out of sync at times, specifically with SFX
  2. News cast on radio sounded like it was read pretty flatly. I'd expect more agitation/excitement in the person's voice. Wonderment about what was going on, etc.
  3. Could see the camera operator's shadow on our main character at about 4:34 ... thought it was the zombie's at first, but then realized it was a goof.
  4. It ends abrubptly, not knowing what happened.
Good job for at least finishing it regarless ... that takes character to see it through to the end, even though you missed the deadline. I applaude that very much, and thanks for sharing!
 
It's alright, no worries. Guess I'll brush up and do better next time. Thanks guys.
 
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