I agree with Noel ....and I also think I would try different music tracks and a slightly different edit pace. Its got kind of a slide show regular rythm and could be a little more dynamic.
You have got the camera working real well image wise and there is some very nice grade / cc.
& thanks shooter what do you suggest for pacing? It starts off slower then halfway through starts speeding up with the percussion. What kind of rhythm should it have?