My Short. Love Stinks. Shot with HVX and Letus

[jsauce]

still such a good combo (even though i'm now mostly using the 7d). i really love the look, the grain, etc...

I wrote/directed this short (notice-- it's r rated) last summer but just got the cut down up on youtube. it's funny. please pass it on and share

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MUQaLZQst1s

 

[Madp]

I liked that a lot... Although there's an object in the film that I think you forgot to color correct.

 

[jsauce]

haha...thanks. and funny. it's all about the poop

 

[robertwerden]

priceless

 

[jsauce]

thanks robert!

 

[Richard J. Johnson]

"please get your D!ick off of me" priceless.

 

[jsauce]

"please get your D!ick off of me" priceless.

my favorite line actually...and it came from an improv

 

[ikander]

This was great! Fast paced. Nice performances. Really funny.

Great job!

 

[capel]

I liked the idea. Well shot and acted.

But man, there was waaaaay too much cursing in this. I think there's a line you can cross with the F bomb where it just starts to sound desperate. Like, "Look how edgy this film is! Eh? EHHH?!" It's too bad, because the dialogue is great. It definitely doesn't need that crutch.

Not saying it should have no cursing, but I'd have taken 1/3 of it out. There was a curse word in practically every line.

Other than that, great stuff. Some really nice cinematography in there and really solid acting too.