My Short Film for class....

There were sound issues, but you know that. I liked your use of the lighting in the area you shot to help convey feeling. When you did the last push on the young man you wobbled a lot. Using a tripod would help that. If you were using a tripod... Throw it out. I had trouble understanding some lines but your point was conveyed well through the dialog I heard.

I want to encourage you to continue making films. You did a fine job here in three nights of shooting. Thank you for sharing it with us. :grin:
 
Very well put together. Also noticed by some of the effects that you're a fan of Video Copilot. Good use of the effects as in some videos people tend to overuse those kind of effects such as the demon face or getting hit by the car but since this was a surreal sort of setting it worked well with what you did. Overall it made sense by the end which I thought was good. Keep up with the good work
 
yea audio my trouble was volume at the tension spots and those spots i needed it loud to affect the audience the way i want too
 
I can say i liked it, you had some good shots and some spots of good acting, but overall i was confused about what was going on.
 
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