My PSA

Good over all, few complaints.

Sound? Anything?

The background for your text was OK, but the text itself comes off as cheese to me. (except the ending font)

The color correction to me doesn't lend to the feeling I think you were going for. I think a little shift towards the blue/green hues would be more mood invoking.

Fade out at end or something similar planed? It was a little abrupt.
 
BennisHahn said:
Good over all, few complaints.

Sound? Anything?

The background for your text was OK, but the text itself comes off as cheese to me. (except the ending font)

The color correction to me doesn't lend to the feeling I think you were going for. I think a little shift towards the blue/green hues would be more mood invoking.

Fade out at end or something similar planed? It was a little abrupt.
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Well, I struggled with the text. I came up with many different versions and this is the one I stuck with. Man if you didn't like this one, you should see what I started out with.

I like the color grading, but it's good to hear your view.

I left the fade out intentionally. I wanted to make a statement. I guess that didn't work for you.

Thanks for the comments.
 
BennisHahn said:
I hear yeah, I was really trying to nitpick here. Over all I think the piece looks good. Keep it up!
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Thanks again.... I think the first version of the quicktime output didn't include the audio.... I put a new version with the audio so if you didn't hear it please check it out again.
 
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