My new trailer- Deployment Strategy

[markcheng]

this one's a bit longer and has an original soundtrack. all dvx..

would love all comments & feedback!!

Windows Media - 8 megs

Divx - 25 megs (better quality)

Quicktime - 40 megs (better quality)

 

[Brandon Rice]

love the music! cool story too... the leads acting seems pretty off.

 

[MalcolmOng]

Its Finally Hereeeeee!!!

 

[EJ Pennypacker]

Hi Mark,

First, hats off to you for going for the Sci-Fi thing. The CGI of those robots looked very cool, as did all the big guns and such.

Now as a trailer goes, it was very reliant on dialogue to explain the story (IMO). I was wondering what your thoughts might be to intercut more title cards with written words so we can spoon feed the audience the information.

Audio seemed to clip out too.

G-luck anyways.

Just my 2c.

EJ

 

[Jake W]

Story seems pretty cool..i dont know about the acting though...

 

[Justin_Kirch]

sounds like you recorded the the dialogue in a tin can....other than that, looks fun.

 

[markcheng]

yeah i hear you guys. had the same thoughts too. i think the text is on the heavy side. the sound should get better once the sound mix and foley is done. thanks for the feedback.