My new short movie

I thought it was a really good short. I know you probably don't want to hear this but I thought it could be way better if you had a narrator at the start tell what it's about like they do on MTV reality type shows. Like an Ashton Kutcher type guy describing it like it's an actual show on TV. Then instead of that cheesy 70s porno music you got going on, actually play the sound of them trying to keep quiet, the background sounds, and then the outbursts. I think it would be way funnier hearing people blurt out a sound.

But I'm guessing you were restricted by their rules though of it being a silent film. Otherwise great job! I really liked the casting on it.
 
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