My new first improvised short

[grey-apple]

Hi to all

I am a new forum user and also a news dvx user, two weeks ago it's arrived the camera and go out to try her. i falling in love.:love4:
It's born an improvised short, it's nothing but i would to share with the community the same.

thanks:dankk2:

sorry for my english, i 'am an italian with serious porblems with foreign languages :crybaby:

link: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x8ild_football

 

[Martini Yernazty]

Hey raggazzo good job but you have to cut those stories, after the first hit , and yes make it the same but cut them faster, we know what's going to happend, so cut it faster, that means, shorter and less shots, but I like the idea of never ending it

 

[noonansboy]

This is the first time I have ever seen an Italian playing football without diving like a big girl.Some nice shots also.