SHORT: My new film- The Mend

Nice work. I enjoyed it, ill post some more feedback later, but overall a nice looking, nicely shot piece.
 
thanks, I am looking forward to it. For everyone else, I would love some feedback on this film. I am a aspiring director at Yale University, I'm a sophomore with still a lot to learn. Open ears here for comments. Thank you!
 
Ok, i watched this last night and i like the look. What was this shot on, lighting setup?

I did notice a few shots with a little slightly shakey cam, but not intrusive.

I think you did a good job of getting some decent performances from your actors. Sound could have been a little better, but i understand as well as anyone else that when your doing stuff like this you dont always have access to the best audio equipment.

I think the editing could be a little tighter, or different. I found some parts to be a little long, and there were some parts i was a little confused as to what was going on with the plot.

I think i became a little distracted part of the way through, and it could be tough to keep your audience the entire way through.

I don't want to leave any spoilers, but im not sure if i totally got everything.

Aside from that, it was a nice looking piece, im sure some of the more seasoned veterans can offer you some additional feedback.

jon
 
For future reference double check your focus. The doctor shots are mostly soft. I also thought the actors were pretty well cast.
 
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