My initial attempt

TeeTime

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Hi Everyone,

I am trying to make a business show that's both educational and entertaining. I know this isn't going to compare to any of the other videos I have seen on here but I am hoping that I can get some feedback as to how to improve on the show concept. How do I make it more entertaining and educational as well? Any thoughts?

Here is the link to the video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWikva3I6k4
 
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