My hometown, first try

Kind of a strange spinning shot to end on. Other than that it looked ok. Would have been nice to see a bit of movement, slow pans or zooms. The first few shots were so still i thought they were photographs.
 
looked very nice in camera. The shot before the last spinning one kinda hung on a bit long, but pretty good.
 
Rythem

Rythem

I could not open the video. Yet it sounds as if the previous two where refering to the fact video, like music, has rythem. In fact, an edited sequence has internal and external rythem. External refering to the time distance from edit to edit: the type of transition choosen. Internal refering to subject and or camera movement. Subject: the speed of speach or body movement. Also, distance from subject to subject in frame. When doing a camera move, the tempo of objects moving throuh the composition creates an internal rythem.

Maybe you were wanting to start out slow and end with excitement!

Anyway, not trying to critic. Just support a fellow artist. Shoot and edit On!

Jeffery Tahl
 
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