My Hallows Fest Entry :(

Robbie Comeau

Robbie Comeau

Como's back. back again
Guys, here is my in-complete Hallows Fest entry. I didn't get to finish it because my actors are being realy hard, and i'm not sure if i like the script, nor the video so far. I might just continue this short later on in the future, I don't know. I feel bad doing this because I wanted to get in on this.

I used a dvx, my rode mic, and a tripod. Shot it in about 2 hours, and took a couple to hours to edit. Here she is:



http://blip.tv/file/422065?filename=ComeauProductions-Entry620.mov
 
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looked nice, i like your little widescreen trick. audio was good but one tip would be to record 5 minutes of ambient sound at your location then lay it under the rest of your audio, this will help make your cuts sound smoother.

as far as the story.... acting wasn't that great. If you had used maybe an old dirty perv snapping the pictures it would have been creepier. He could start getting really excited and towards the end when she starts running he could start laughing. You could make the luagh just go on and on getting louder and louder echoing through the woods as she is running away.

overall it looked and sounded really good but subject matter could have been stronger.
 
Wait, what kind of a creep uses a flash when stalking. In the daytime. Kids these days, don't even know how to stalk a girl proper.
 
hahahahahahahahaha

That's exactly why I didn't enter the fest Mark...
 
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Well, the girl is suppose to go back with a friend, and then they see the creeper. But i couldn't think of anything, and my actors are kinda bailin, and it isn't going well
 
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