COMMERCIAL: My grunge style. Constructive criticism please!

[Zacshome]

Any hints on a better way to do it? or on my filming style? I want to get better here guys!! please help






http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sRqrddvJhYE

 

[Justin Kuhn]

I think you're just fishing for compliments Nice cut. keep up the good work. Maybe upload at a higher rez.

 

[Zacshome]

It is uploaded at 32mb's a second? And no.. My competition doesn't do as good a job as me but gets all the work!! So I want to know what others think.....Where I can go better and so on. Sorry if i sound like I am fishing, but I truly am not.