My First Two Videos... Suggestions Please!!!

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Brady

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I've just completed my first two videos (click on the dodgeball link to view the other one). I would love to hear your thoughts and any constructive criticism you might have! ;) Thanks!

www.globalsupportmission.com (our temporary site...)

-Brady
 
Hi Brady -

I loved the concept of the GSM video - the power of the stop motion chair titles was fantastic, almost at odds with the cheery disposition of the music.
Not that depressing people actually motivates them to do much, but you could present the problem (your chair sequence) then the solution GSM. Then the result that the audience can participate in - happy kids.

Remember, marketing has to answer the viewers basic question of "what's in this for me" and you sort of get me there, I love to see kids happy and would gladly support that, but really - how do I get involved (you only have to tease at that, not a lot of detail) and more importantly, what do I get out of being involved.

Also, you don't mention the location (or even country) that your organization is in or how to get involved (I know, big launch coming up, blah blah) but what if I was so compelled to get off my ass now and do something? And I live in Texas?

The dodgeball was funny - you could tighten up your edits a bit (the George Lucas school of I'd rather cut it too short than slow down the pace) but it's funny and informative.

Great work on both videos - hope they go big for you .

PS. my first widely seen video was a missions recruiting video that blew every rule of marketing, but it still got people to go on missions, that's what matters most.
 
that was really beautiful man. Great work. If you are involved with this movement, then extra kudos to you. What a great cause ( in theory ) pracitcally, will this ever happen? I can only wish.
 
VERY impressive. it looks very professional, music, edits, well done... good luck with your event...
 
looks really great
Only one thing missing in the dodgball movie. you showed the two teams of adults against kids and didn't use that feature for comedy. Like maybe the adults are too hard on the kids or the kids cream the adults.
Other than that it was totaly awsome
 
Wow, the first one is SO inspiring, great job, I loved it. It gave me goosebumps! The second one was made so well too! Wow, I mean it must have taken a good deal of time and effort to make it, so well done!
 
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