My first Short film

[yommytacoe]

The Pitch: The classic campfire tale of "Knock Knock Knock" Pretty girl + Unreliable car + escaped killer = High School Film project.

This was my first short film for a high school project a few years ago. It was on a friends computer so I hadn't watched it in a while, and now looking back, I'm quite impressed. Aside from some mistakes only a beginner would make (white balance, ect) I think it doesn't look half bad. Especially considering the following:
Filmed with:
Canon Elura 100
Edited with:
iMovie

Many of you are quite experienced/talented. I know this isn't great, but I wanted to share it with you for your entertainment.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cUL8aiZJxw8

 

[Pastor Thug]

I used my imagination and the chick was hot.

Maybe a link would prove me wrong?

 

[yommytacoe]

Thank you haha

Thank you haha

I used my imagination and the chick was hot.

Maybe a link would prove me wrong?

That was silly of me. Heres the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cUL8aiZJxw8

 

[egyptianboxer104]

pretty good.

Positive: mostly good camera work, good angles, good story.

Negitive: Audio could be better... but on a super low budget like this I wouldn't blame you for it. Also the shots inside the car could have been made better. Instead of switching from person to person, maybe you could have had a side shot for a few moments of dialogue, focusing in and out?

overall very good.

 

[yommytacoe]

Thanks,
I totally agree with your comments. I made this twoish years ago, and its interesting to watch and think of the things I would change now being more experienced.