My first short film I made for school would like some feedback.

[tanmanforlife]

Hey everyone, this is a movie called Stranger...and I am going to be expanding the idea as time goes on I just wanted some feedback about it. here is the link:

http://www.07designs.com/Stranger/

thanks everyone for your time!

-Neil

 

[mikesb05]

your clip stopped playing for me about 20 seconds in

 

[Deacon]

I really liked the feel of your film. The edit was very interesting. I found the scene where the alarm clock wakes him looks likes video though and could use something to soften it.