My first Real Attempt

Norval,
Great stuff. 2 weeks ah. Nice.
Acting was not too strong but not necessarily your fault. The 2nd girl gets upset because he calls her "nobody" and 2 seconds later she is super happy????
And the music needs to enhance the feeling of fear. I liked it and thought it was good at making you feel afraid, but I think most movies that really capture the audience and make them scared rely so much on the music to set the tone.
Good luck.
For 2 weeks and no crew, you did an amazing job.
 
WOW Guys, thanx for the compliments. I really can't wait to make more, I've got the bug. Pretty much everything I've learned came from constant browsing of DVXUSER. all you guys on here are really selfless! willing to help others with great advice and not receiving anything in return other than satisfaction of knowing you are giving something to a community of like minded individuals. I guess what i'm saying is you all gave me a lot and i can't express my gratitude enough!!
 
lookin good, too bad on the lot made it 4x3 looks kinda bad, got me sucked in...story could have been stronger but your on the right track, it felt and looked like a "film" not some cheap "video" as 99% of all videos on the net do....

give it a good twist in the end and you have a real winner of a film. was a bit of a let down..I was expecting/hoping for some type of twist that would have been stronger then how it ended.
 
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