Rakesh Jacob
Veteran
Ok so there are several (atleast) technical issues or things that could be improved but I'm more interested in if you think it's funny or not.
Me and my friends were trying to come up with a concept for a web series. I wanted something that would give us creative license to talk/rant/b!tch/berate/exhault just about anything we felt like.
This is the first actual scripted peice I've tried writing and this is our first time acting. Also we tend to use the F-word alot; and I don't mean FART. So... beware of very bad language and even worse acting :thumbup:
www.myspace.com/quantumgeorge
thanx for the responses guys...
Me and my friends were trying to come up with a concept for a web series. I wanted something that would give us creative license to talk/rant/b!tch/berate/exhault just about anything we felt like.
This is the first actual scripted peice I've tried writing and this is our first time acting. Also we tend to use the F-word alot; and I don't mean FART. So... beware of very bad language and even worse acting :thumbup:
www.myspace.com/quantumgeorge
thanx for the responses guys...