My first music videos

[RandomHero]

Hey everyone. I've seen some excellent constructive criticisms on here for others before. Now it's my turn. Please give me any input positive or negative that ya got. Thanks!
-Jesse

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q2Mei-omk2Q

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0IyfCLLNeCU

 

[RandomHero]

Here's the HD version of "Oil and Water"
http://vimeo.com/1534959