my first music video

[Nugroho Siswantoro]

hi all
its my first music video shot on d90's.
still learning.

http://www.vimeo.com/9193658

what do you think?
thanks.

 

[J.R. Hudson]

I really enjoyed this but would loved to have seen some more wider shots; it got a little claustrophobic visually.

But wonderful colors and tight editing.

 

[Nugroho Siswantoro]

I really enjoyed this but would loved to have seen some more wider shots; it got a little claustrophobic visually.

But wonderful colors and tight editing.

thanks for your comment,
maybe i got influenced from the bokeh, that push me to shoot more close-up shot.

 

[Ruzo]

I think the problem is more of a lack of angles then wide shots.

 

[J.R. Hudson]

Yeah you're right

It's a 360 degree world and it seems its hard for people to realize that when a camera is in their hands.

 

[gwales]

I agree about varying the angles.

Editing should be more tightly linked to the band's performance. For instance, when the guitarist starts strumming, there is a slight delay before cutting to a close-up of the fret board. Same with the singer immediately after. Band editing should 'play in time' with the music, IMO.

At least you don't do really fast cuts, which give me a migraine.



It's a great start though, keep it up.