My first latin girl XV birthday pop

yucateco

yucateco

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Hi, is my first clip latin girl XV birthday old, in pop music


Feddback please, remenber is my first clip jejeje :thumbsup:

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What'd you use for the particle effects? Combustion?

I couldn't tell that was a music video... I can't complain about the content because it was nice to look at ;) BUT you might want to have the group singing or something. I seriously thought it was for an escort service or something. After knowing what the content was and watching it a second time...it's pretty good, but the blurring effects were a little overused, and the white diffusion.
 
The flowers blooming were pretty cool. That song is garbage. How does a looped song end up being so long?
 
Ok, not bad for your first video, but it needs some work. All your effects are affecting your 16:9 mask and it really drove me nuts. Put a 16:9 mask over the final project so you have a nice clean mask that doesn't blur or wash out and the particle effects shouldn't be visible on the mask either. Also, why no performance shots in the video? Unfortunately, the dancing is mediocre and is the most prominent movement in the vid. If you can't get crisp energetic moves out of the girl, I'd really minimize or completely drop them. The girl was uncomfortable and it shows. I'd be she looks a lot looser when she's singing, but you didn't show it, my friend. How about some closeups on that pretty face? Too many flash cuts and blur cuts--use a few for flavor and don't wear them out. Also, too heavy on the diffusion effect--at least for my taste. The blooming flowers were nice, but the other particle effects were cheese--be very careful about using canned effects.
 
particles is particle illusion


Thanks, i really apreciated the coments, is good for me,
1.-"All your effects are affecting your 16:9 mask " ok,
2.-"the dancing is mediocre " yes Iknow
3.-"The girl was uncomfortable and it shows" is true
4.- "Too many flash cuts and blur cuts--"" but the blurring effects were a little overused, and the white diffusion."
5.-"be very careful about using canned effects."

the next shot i remenber this coments, for a better work
"Ok, not bad for your first video, but it needs some work" jejeje too much work :)


and thaks again for my second shot i take the coments presents

maybe in two years i win DVXFest, i wish
(its a Joke) :thumbsup:
P.D. Sorry for my bad English
 
ok, for one day, my Bandwidth Limit Exceeded, and pay for more(in a few days reset to 0)

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