Wow, its uuhhh abrupt. At first I was like ok why do I want to see some guy half naked, then I realized it was two different guys. It is interesting, one of those shots that make you think about what you just saw. Looks like you shot that in letterbox. Was it 30p or 24p?
Heh - it's okay - just tell me where to go if this isn't the right forum. I'm looking for a place where I could share clips/films and such and get feedback on it.