My First Commercial

The only flaw that jumps out at me is the white balance was off on the elderly lady coming down the hallway (or at least her color temperature doesn't match the other scenes).

But the bigger and more important point - the overall commercial is well done in my humble opinion...

Lonnie
 
Looked good. Really liked the first shot of the bike riders, but the color on the second shot was different from the first.

I'd consider getting the VO redone in a studio if possible. That was the weakest part of the whole commercial, it sounded a little thin and cheap.
 
Lonnie said:
The only flaw that jumps out at me is the white balance was off on the elderly lady coming down the hallway (or at least her color temperature doesn't match the other scenes).

But the bigger and more important point - the overall commercial is well done in my humble opinion...

Lonnie
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That blue look works IMO. Everything doesn't HAVE to be all warm.

I like it.
 
mcgeedigital said:
That blue look works IMO. Everything doesn't HAVE to be all warm.
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Yeah I agree. Looks fine to me. Actually suits the piece in this instance.

If you did want to change it get yourself a white balance pug in - fixed, not really hard.

I think for your first up, this was a good place to start. Pretty straight forward. Theres a number of things I would have done different, but Im not you so... You sold the message well enough. Watch shooting at windows if you can help it. You can push a little more art into it. Get as much coverage as budget allows at all times.
 
looks good to me too, good job.

Did you use stock music, or record that yourself too? if it is stock from where did you source it?

thanks,
Derrick
 
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