My First Attempt

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bwpaint

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Any thoughts, comments and critisms are welcome
here is my first attempt at videography and editing
just got my new panasonic, Adobe premiere and Matrox installed yesterday, and a friend had been asking, once I got it all installed if I would shoot a video of his bike to put up for sale...so there I went....("where the hell is the auto button?"....never mind, I found it!)

so be gentle guys....remember this is my first video...

after watching it, I see web version transitions are not as smooth as the originals and my cuts should be faster...

suggestions are welcome....but gentle, I am frail and sensitive.....you can tell by the music....

...from a newbie....that is looking forward to being apart of the videography industry...

thanks in advance
 
Good first attempt!!
1. What was the purpose? If it was a product splash, it needs to be cut way down. Too much redundancy...edit...edit...edit....
2. too much hand-held scenes and more tripod shooting (like the scene of the bike driving down the street)
3. too long on the zooms and pans
4. good use of masks and transitions
5. good use of different angles
6. overall good start with good transition use and camera angle variations but way too long and redundant.
7. Keep going !!!
 
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