My 15 second commercial - Enjoy!

[HKFF]

I made this for a 15 second commercial competition, but I didn't get to submit it on time.

The rules were: make a 15 second "job" themed commercial.

It's called: The Resume, The Portfolio, and The Interview.

I'm open to constructive criticism, thanks!

http://z28.zupload.com/download.php?file=getfile&filepath=5709

 

[twocik23]

Its a little shaky but has potential. Also the fonts could be better. I like the sound effects.

 

[Zac Henke]

...odd


The SFX kind of consumed the... well... everything else

Lower your levels!


Otherwise, uh.... cool? WHAT WERE YOU ADVERTISING BECAUSE I WANT TO BUY IT.

 

[HKFF]

Thanks for the comments.

It's an advertisement for a youth program that I run. I'm "beating" the point that the program-"Resilient Young Asian Network" will provide more experience to "beef up" your resume and portolio to "pass" the interview.

 

[LloydC]

I liked it. Maybe make it 16:9 as you were going for that chinese kung fu film type style. Give it a more filmic look.
Also, change that text.

 

[HKFF]

I liked it. Maybe make it 16:9 as you were going for that chinese kung fu film type style. Give it a more filmic look.
Also, change that text.

Thanks LloydC! Glad you liked it.

the text well - ugh I wish I had better selection, and I had to get this out last min for the competition so yeah... and originally I wanted to make it 1.85:1, but didn't want to make the intro shots too small, so I didn't do it. Thanks for the pointers!

How could I make more filmic? I've been trying to figure this out... I don't know what it needs.

:beer: