Music video I did for my sisters

[jokerandkidder]

This was the first thing I made when I got the DVX. There a lot of things I wish I could have changed, mainly the audio levels and sync, but I thought I would post it to see what people had to say about it. Just to warn you the song is very catchy and will get stuck in your head.

http://rapidshare.de/files/5480773/naturalstatesmall.wmv.html

 

[Mortimer]

rapidshare is being a real pain in the ass and won't let me download the file..sorry

 

[Indy]

First time I've come across these people and I hope its the last!! (

Indy....

 

[Raptor3400]

Well, its a good early effort. There are numerous technical issues that you need to address. First, the sound is really bad, you cant even hear the vocals, the lyrics are indecernable. What microphone did you use? The camera could use some movement. Many shots were overexposed. The cutaways didnt have anything, that I could tell, to do with the performance. I don't want to sound too harsh, the girls performance seemed sweet and honest, but I think you need to practice getting better sound, and also trying to storyboard a little, I think it would give you a better roadmap for the kind of music video you really want to do.

 

[Raptor3400]

I said in my previous reply that the girls performance seemed really sweet. Well, obviously the drummer is a dude. sorry drummer dude.