MUSIC VIDEO: Music Video Help!

[Prophetmatt]

Hi All! I recently produced a music video for a local 14 year old country singer named Leah Burkey. Anyways, this was my first time setting up some lighting for a shoot. The lights used were one Lowell Tota 650 watt and two lights both 150watt with a purple gel and a diffuser on the other. We used a Z96 for the backlight of Leah. With that being said, any tips and constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. I know some of the shots aren't lit well due to the light placement. If you are interested, the video is shot with a Sony FS100 and a Canon T3i! The video is not final as there is some more color grading to occur!

Here is the video! The Password is Leah

 

[john threat]

that was A class excellente! you did a good job! you rock!
song is 4 minutes - you probably could use a third scenario to intercut with the footage you have would be my suggestion
she is a star and so are you
hurray!