Music Video for my song

um... i couldnt watch it all with the sound on. so what i can offer is the composition isnt very good on a majority of the shots. - like the shot of you sitting on the bed also the shot of you with the buildings in the background. It all seemed kind of drab too. Dont know if the dull office building look was something you were going for. I also think the shots of the drums were not really needed. that may have been cool if it were done in a different way but to me it just looks like an electronic drum set in a bedroom. I'm not trying to be harsh as I usually dont comment on peoples videos much but I will say I do respect the work ou put into this I just think you need to keep shooting and learn to look at light and also study compositions.
 
Thanks for being honest. I did what I could with what I had, which isn't a lot...especially with a $0 budget and no one else working with me, aside from someone behind the camera.
I thought the drum shots were good filler shots, transitioning between a scene, as well as for the intro. And yes, they are in a living room. Again, didn't have the means necessary to just pick them up and load them in car and set them up myself.
This was by no means made to be professional, as a lot of the shots/lyrics all have a personal meaning to me and a person no longer in my life. I just came up with the idea and decided to try to do it and put it in motion and use what resources I had, no matter the result.
Thanks for the offering and the time spent watching. I do appreciate it.
 
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